Hello this is a unfinished DLO but I'm showing you so I can have some feedback on it so I can make my next DLO better then this one. but the DLO was from this text called first up. Me and group readied the text and my friend Peter help too and this is our DLO.
Bonsoir Hati,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you sharing your learning (not just finished work!). Ka pai. I would suggest you and your partner read through your DLO out loud. You'll see you have made a few mistakes which can easily be fixed up.
Let me know below if this helps you.
Hola Hati,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your DLO, But it's not finished yet. Maybe you could add some preferences or credits to tell where you got your information from. Still good job and great information. How much time did you put into your DLO?
From Lyle