I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This is where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
This is a 4 sentence recount about all the cool thing that I did in the holidays and they were really fun and also if you can comment on down below about what I did wrong or good.
Hello Hati I really like your holiday, and how was jhoan's birthday? Sorry I couldn't go there because I couldn't go and I didn't know because I forgot but I was at my cousin's house playing black ops zombies, Did you have fun watching the minions? I hope so, and what mall were you in, me and my mum and dad watched inside out. It was a good movie it was sad and joyful, the movie tells you what can happen sometimes without joy or sadness and if you are just left with fear,disgust and anger.
Kia ora Hati I see you had a great holiday last term. I like how you said you went to Johans birthday. Because it meant that you were building relationships with friends at school. Which means that you did one of our school prompts which is really good. Also you didn't even know until we got back to Term 3. Or did you know? From Simeon
Kia ora Hati, Your holidays sounded amazing! You played bowling? That sounded realy fun. I like how you are so positive as you said you didn't win but but enjoyed it and had an awesome time. From Nikolai
Hello Hati
ReplyDeleteI really like your holiday, and how was jhoan's birthday? Sorry I couldn't go there because I couldn't go and I didn't know because I forgot but I was at my cousin's house playing black ops zombies, Did you have fun watching the minions? I hope so, and what mall were you in, me and my mum and dad watched inside out. It was a good movie it was sad and joyful, the movie tells you what can happen sometimes without joy or sadness and if you are just left with fear,disgust and anger.
Kia ora Hati
ReplyDeleteI see you had a great holiday last term. I like how you said you went to Johans birthday. Because it meant that you were building relationships with friends at school. Which means that you did one of our school prompts which is really good. Also you didn't even know until we got back to Term 3. Or did you know?
From Simeon
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Hati,
ReplyDeleteYour holidays sounded amazing! You played bowling? That sounded realy fun. I like how you are so positive as you said you didn't win but but enjoyed it and had an awesome time.
From Nikolai